• Необходимо пользоваться числовыми показателями из таблицы/диаграммы, в готовом задании должно быть НЕ менее трех чисел со знаком % из таблицы/диаграммы
• Числа должны быть записаны цифрами, НЕ словами
• В заключении мнение автора должно быть выражено эксплицитно, то есть с использованием формы I think/I believe/I am sure that
• В высказывании должно быть 5 или более слов/конструкций-связок
Далее мы приводим пример готового задания, в котором жирным шрифтом выделены слова и выражения, которые мы предлагаем для постоянного использования при выполнении такого задания. Вы можете изменить его, как вам нравится, а можете использовать для своих ответов целиком.
Today, many teenagers take up summer jobs. I am currently working on a project about popular summer jobs among teenagers in Zetland.I have found some relevant data (opinion polls) presented in a table and in this essay I am going to analyse this data and express my opinion on the topic of the research.
According to the data, the most popular summer job among the adolescents in Zetland is a street cleaner as it was mentioned by 40% of the respondents. The data also shows that some teenagers prefer to work as waiters (18%) and babysitters (16%) in summer.
Interestingly, the data in the table shows that the number of teenagers who work as dog walkers (15%) is almost the same as the number of those who choose to work as babysitters (16%). This can be explained by the fact that teenagers prefer to work in some familiar home-like environment, probably because this comforts them after days of spending almost all of their time at school.
There are some problems that can arise with working as a babysitter. One of the key issues which can be mentioned is that someone might not know how to handle young children right, which might lead to some bad experiences or even psychological traumas in kids. To prevent this from happening, local communities could organise some courses for those who do not know how to deal with young children.
In conclusion, I would like to say that I personally believe that having a summer job is really important. It can teach people to be responsible and it can give an opportunity to gain some new skills.
Также для удобства самопроверки мы предлагаем учащимся проверять себя по чек-листу развёрнутого письменного высказывания на основе таблицы/диаграммы.